asking favors

song idea ;)

 

Comfortably

Alone again

Spending my time

With halogens

At the end of the line

In the back of the pack

Holding up my number

Staring down the sack

Considering

what I could do

To help me get

up front with you

To the tip of my tongue

Where they’d be set free

My words die young

In false heresy

 

But if you would just do me one thing

Stop holding the reigns, telling birds when to sing

Just because there is no light

Doesn’t mean that it’s night

One thing you could do for me

Try to be free

 

Counting the stars

Because they never end

Wasting my time

With experiments

Fiddling with ropes

Playing with fire

Mixing gases

Trying to expire

Considering

What I could do

Just to get

Noticed by you

On the edge of the cliff

One click of the top

Looking for a clip

Just in time to stop

 

But if you would just do me a favor

Stop holding me back, making me lose my flavor

Just because there's no sun

Doesn’t mean the day is done

One thing you could do for me

Set me free

 

Saying I’m sorry

For the very last time

Giving up

On these failing lines

Getting out

Where I can be

Someone who

Is more like me

 

And if you would do me the honor

Give me the keys, say you loved her

Just because I am gone

Doesn’t mean you’ve won

If you would do one last thing for me

Just one favor I’m asking please

Could you, would you

Forget me?

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[bluessadmood]

But if you would just do me one thing
Stop holding the reigns, telling birds when to sing
Just because there is no light
Doesn't mean that it's night
One thing you could do for me
Try to be free
But if you would just do me a favor
Stop holding me back, making me lose my flavor
Just because there's no sun
Doesn't mean the day is done
One thing you could do for me
Set me free..
lovely ,wonderful write
lovely write..