My Lost Sanity

My Lost Sanity

A Poem by Ahmad Alhour
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Written : February 5th, 2009

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[ My Lost Sanity ]


Words so weak,
form the embodiment in which they seek...
failure as moments pass,
was, and still, not an option
as Nature breeds the leeks

O, My Lord, bless me not !
for I have been righteous
as the gift of madness I shall recieve
and dwell in caves...
and conquer all mundane seas...
where betrayed, with disturbance, was Eve
ere the rising of moon,
and the fall of yawning laughter...

Is it the moment of mourn ?!
Or another day bereaved of reality unshown !
Answer me, and save my sanity !
For I am drowned in virutes,
with vices of sin...
and dreams of facing vanities...





( © 2009 - All Rights Reserved Belial )

© 2009 Ahmad Alhour


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For I am drowned in virutes,
with vices of sin...
and dreams of facing vanities..

whhhoooaaaaaaa.......you seem to be having some gr8 time out there.... ;) lol jus kidding.. this is a very profound write... loud!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago


The question always remains, who is sane and who is not, who decides right from wrong, logic or not? To be more honest, if you believe you have lost your sanity, well guess what? I don't think i even had it then!
You showed your sanity and sense of writing up there.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ahmad Alhour
Ahmad Alhour

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