A Poem by A Jackson

A poem about heartache and being alone.


"Hurt, anger, pain, regret

weighing me down I want to forget.

Love, lust, comfort, belong

are memories since you have been gone.


Heartache and emptiness

fill me inside.

Haunting my dreams,

I can't run, I can't hide.


Your face is a blur

distorting my mind

Erasing the night

you left me, I try.


So many nights

I sat in the dark

As you went out 'nowhere'

and tore me apart.


Living a lie and

ignoring my pain

One day I hope

I'll never feel this again."

© 2014 A Jackson

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"Living a lie and

ignoring my pain

One day I hope

I'll never feel this again."

I like how you conveyed your thoughts and emotions...Bravo........................

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A Jackson

7 Years Ago

Thanks Sami! I appreciate your comments :-)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................
I really like this!
You did a great job relaying how the narrator feels heartbreak and loneliness.
Many will be able to relate to this.
Good use of rhyme that didn't seem forced at all.
Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

A Jackson

7 Years Ago

Hi Claire,

Thank you for your comments, always enjoy reading feedback.

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Added on February 25, 2014
Last Updated on February 25, 2014


A Jackson
A Jackson

Birmingham, United Kingdom

Born and raised in Birmingham, Britain’s second city, I’m a real city girl through and through. As an account manager for a marketing agency, I have mainly focused my professional writing .. more..

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