Broken

Broken

A Poem by A Jackson
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A poem about heartache and being alone.

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"Hurt, anger, pain, regret

weighing me down I want to forget.

Love, lust, comfort, belong

are memories since you have been gone.

 

Heartache and emptiness

fill me inside.

Haunting my dreams,

I can't run, I can't hide.

 

Your face is a blur

distorting my mind

Erasing the night

you left me, I try.

 

So many nights

I sat in the dark

As you went out 'nowhere'

and tore me apart.

 

Living a lie and

ignoring my pain

One day I hope

I'll never feel this again."

© 2014 A Jackson


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"Living a lie and

ignoring my pain

One day I hope

I'll never feel this again."

I like how you conveyed your thoughts and emotions...Bravo........................

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A Jackson

7 Years Ago

Thanks Sami! I appreciate your comments :-)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...................
I really like this!
You did a great job relaying how the narrator feels heartbreak and loneliness.
Many will be able to relate to this.
Good use of rhyme that didn't seem forced at all.
Nice job!
~Claire

Posted 7 Years Ago


A Jackson

7 Years Ago

Hi Claire,

Thank you for your comments, always enjoy reading feedback.

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A Jackson
A Jackson

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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