French entangle

French entangle

A Poem by Anita Frader
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love

"

Your breath

I could never forget its warmth before the kiss

nor could I resist

the wetness of a french entangle

 

even our silhouettes could not tell us apart

blended as one force

echoing through hearts with a shower of shooting stars

 

such was ours, love

© 2024 Anita Frader


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Well the line that stood out for me was the "echoing through hearts with a shower of shooting stars" line, but mainly because my thoughts on a "french entangle brough5 back happy memories i have of a french lady who once let herself showme how her shower worked, by taking off her somethings and staying in the shower with me until she could trust me to turn the dial required! And seeing as their is no drop down memories rating for comments, i cannot possibly comment further wirhout rating the comment as mature too! 😊
Now if youll excuse me, i have to pop out for a make believe cig after that, seeing as i quit years ago! 😊
But great write and now i am spent! 😊

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

2 Weeks Ago

It was. I never felt dirtier while getting clean 😊
Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

🙉 covering my ears
Lorry

2 Weeks Ago

And im covering my eyes, honest. Just in case your towel slips by accident and i get more discombob.. read more



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The best Kiss is just a "breath" that leaves you wanting more.
A very sensual Rendezvous.... softly, Pat

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you 🙏 💛
Well the line that stood out for me was the "echoing through hearts with a shower of shooting stars" line, but mainly because my thoughts on a "french entangle brough5 back happy memories i have of a french lady who once let herself showme how her shower worked, by taking off her somethings and staying in the shower with me until she could trust me to turn the dial required! And seeing as their is no drop down memories rating for comments, i cannot possibly comment further wirhout rating the comment as mature too! 😊
Now if youll excuse me, i have to pop out for a make believe cig after that, seeing as i quit years ago! 😊
But great write and now i am spent! 😊

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry

2 Weeks Ago

It was. I never felt dirtier while getting clean 😊
Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

🙉 covering my ears
Lorry

2 Weeks Ago

And im covering my eyes, honest. Just in case your towel slips by accident and i get more discombob.. read more
sounds like a lucky other

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for your comment 🙂
I found this to be very poignant! What a kiss!! ❤️

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much, Sam!
The poem was so beautiful. You made me see and believe in the movement of love. Thank you dear Anita for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

I appreciate the warm comment. Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome dear Anita.


my word .. this is what we here too call a love poem .. and for what its worth, the idea of conjoint silhouettes as seen through these poor old eyes of mine is quite heavenly .. I am glad I came by this way this mane my friend .. Neville


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much Nevile. I'm glad you looked upon it favorably!
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


.............. you bet 🙂👍
Beautiful. I can taste the kiss. Great writing.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anita Frader

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Thomas 💛🙂
I like the slow pace of this, the waves of words that capture the rhythm of the encounter. I'm never too enamoured of the word 'melded' but it get across what you are showing - the harmony of two people together. 'Warmth', 'wetness', 'shower' help us feel the intensity of the kiss, leaving us to imagine the tango of tongues...

Oui... j'aime.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jibey

2 Weeks Ago

The thing is, 'meld' is probably a blend of 'melt' and 'weld', invented in the early 20th Century. I.. read more
Anita Frader

2 Weeks Ago

I love the discussion this has sparked. I'm going to think on this a bit. 💙 I appreciate the .. read more
Jibey

2 Weeks Ago

Let it not detract from your pleasing poem!

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