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A Poem by Ajla

I continue to ask myself why,
why do this to me
to your best friend
To cause so much pain to a person
who admitted they fell for you
I want to think it's because I shared too much
but if you were real about all you said
and you really loved me back
the way you acted you did,
then you wouldn't have taken advantage
of all the information coming through your brain.

© 2018 Ajla


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Ajla
Past writing, any comments appreciated

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I like this poem so far! Being played around with in love is tortuous and saddening and I think your poem conveys that feeling well. There are some lines that could use some change ups, like "if you were real about all you said", perhaps you could switch 'real' with truthful or honest, I think it would help to clear up what you mean. But so far so good!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ajla

3 Years Ago

Thank you! I'll definitely work on that. Glad you liked it:)

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