Moonless Sky

Moonless Sky

A Poem by Alexandra
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I think this a good way to start. A brief description of the world that i live in. oh and the name is inspired by Ichigo Kurosaki from "Bleach." hope you enjoy (yes i've posted this somewhere else :p)

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Moonless Sky

I exist in a world,

With a moonless sky,

Where, as the sun sets,

The universe dies,

Leaving behind nothing but silence,

Beyond the boundaries.

 

Succumbed to the darkness’s poison,

It lay hidden somewhere, in the horizon,

Cursed forever, never to rise,

To look down upon the helpless,

Wounded and blind.

 

In a blackened city, I stood alone,

This morbid nightmare I call home,

Were joy and happiness faded away,

As the place lost its luminosity.

 

Here, there were no lights,

Only trees, submerged in ice,

The roadsides empty, tranquil and clean,

The atmosphere dull, ominous and grim.

 

Instead of people, shadows would whisper,

Where civilians vanished and nothing did prosper,

Where the night owls were too cold to hoot,

And the crickets were frozen to death.

 

The voice of my piano spread through the air,

Flowing past my somber lair,

Its tune mystic, expressing sorrow,

So, menacing that people’s hearts it hollowed,

 

I have nothing to fear, no debts to bear,

Intoxicated by this elixir I sneer,

Becoming one of the darkness’s own,

A creature of mugestu.

 

Welcome to the valley of the moonless sky,

A world of shadows, secrets and lies,

Where nothing awaits you on the other side,

That is if you can get through first….

© 2014 Alexandra


Author's Note

Alexandra
Feel free to tell me what you think. :) correct me if i have grammatical errors. Thanks! :)

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You moonless sky is intoxicating, so many good lines. This stanza really stood out for me..

The voice of my piano spread through the air,
Flowing past my somber lair,
Its tune mystic, expressing sorrow,
So, menacing that people’s hearts it hollowed

Had to search for 'mugestu', it works well here. Nicely pen'd.



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It really means alot to me :) Mugetsu is a word i learned from Bleach, and litera.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine, enjoyed! :-)



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This is wonderfully dark! It sent shivers down my spine... I noticed, though this is speaking of negativity, it does not speak of sadness. Instead, it has a sense of dignity; of deep dark power. I loved it.

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Alexandra

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D
Your descriptions are fantastic! I just pictured the sad lonely place that some people can get trapped in with no easy way to escape it.

~Stefanie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Alexandra

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :) :)
You moonless sky is intoxicating, so many good lines. This stanza really stood out for me..

The voice of my piano spread through the air,
Flowing past my somber lair,
Its tune mystic, expressing sorrow,
So, menacing that people’s hearts it hollowed

Had to search for 'mugestu', it works well here. Nicely pen'd.



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It really means alot to me :) Mugetsu is a word i learned from Bleach, and litera.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine, enjoyed! :-)

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Alexandra

Dhaka , Bangladesh



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I really suck when it comes to intros, but here goes. I write because its the only way out for me. Out of the nightmares that haunt me. I've been scarred, deeply. If you've read my poems (which i .. more..

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