Sometimes  When You Cross my Mind

Sometimes When You Cross my Mind

A Poem by Alisa Js

I thought of her today as I sometimes do
in  bittersweet  fragmented wisps,
a brief hi-ho
that familiar slash inside my soul


was it really her I missed
or the mystery of 
a Mother's love
I never knew,
not in the way of most ...

© 2023 Alisa Js


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Hi my friend it’s been forever but I love this juxtaposition. The hi ho sound almost jolly and then the slas (pain. Loss) to even it out. I have missed your words. I trust things are well on your part of the planet?

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alisa Js

2 Months Ago

Hello and Happy New Year! so nice to hear from you again! Still living the dream out here in Parad.. read more
Alisa,
Woo! Like stepping on a nail, this one requires I stop and think, of so many fragmented wisps that slash (love the image). They cut so clean! Some are like a Rothco, some a Klimt, some Picasso, and some a Dali... but then, there are those by O'Keefe that make me want to freeze right there forever...
Vol

Posted 5 Months Ago


Alisa Js

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind and thoughtful response

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Alisa Js
Alisa Js

honolulu, HI



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