Criminal Cat

Criminal Cat

A Poem by Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
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Poem - ATC

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Home detention
For a fat cat's like heaven
Too lazy to go out and about
A collar round my ankle 
So classy so meow
So everybody must now bring things to me
If I say they're allowed
Or I'll get my claws out
As I'm a breaking bad criminal kitty cat. 

© 2015 Tinotenda Nyevedzanai


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hahaha what a cute piece and cute pic Ally :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron :)
I feel like a 'criminal cat' sometimes, especially on days when I am snow-bound, like today :)

A fun read ATC!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate the review :)
i really like "So classy so meow"

great line...breaking bad...

in second line should be "cat's" and seventh line i think you meant "they're"---

but yes, get those claws out...you are the Top Cat.

jacob

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob!

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Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

Dallas, Kent



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