Two Men

Two Men

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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Diverse worlds

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Two Men

Yes Sir.......Yes sir!
Ladies & Gentlemen,
Seal........Navy Seal, Sir!
I'm your host Mr. Who,
Take right flank,
You can win a million dollars!
Foxtrot Charlie Alpha, do you read?
And now a word from our sponsor,
Eyes on the target, we have visual!
Now for our first contestant,
Man down.....we have a man down.






© 2014 Alfred Kukitz


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Vanesa I do hope we become buddies. You are a good write! Thanks for visiting!

al

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is great work!
I read it in 3 different ways,
was such a joy to discover!
Thanks!
-VM


Posted 10 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob! I changed it slightly since Ana read it but only slightly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i totally agree with Ana...couldn't have said it better myself...

that poor first contestant....unfortunately there will be many more on the show before it is over.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was a brilliant way of illustrating how far removed we are from reality sometimes.
This was very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2014
Last Updated on December 30, 2014
Tags: Foxtrot, who, seal, navy

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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