The Vitality of Wonder

this is an early write not many read

Vitality of Wonder 

There were many of you in a faceless wonder. 

The strain invisible but the soul embraced them tenderly. 

Many of you have seeked the wonder lust, given in credence, 

Wanted nothing but more. 

There lives in every man and women a dimension 

Where creation, imagination and soul find a nexus, 

A dream within a dream if you will. 

So many have died with only an inkling of this vital phenomenon. 

Will you come back to me with your strength and passion, 

I in turn will share you beauty forevermore.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the idea of creation, imagination and soul being the dream within a dream...the focus on this rather than just wanting more, more, more.
sharing beauty rather than material possession.

nicely done...and what a flow in this last group of poems from you...
jacob