Do You Love
A Poem by
Alfred Kukitz
unexpected
We were caught in the minutia of trance
speaking to us in a rare instance of understanding
“Do You Love”
I could hardly explain myself,
likewise, she felt utterly afraid
finally out in the open,
swirls of gravity caught us in a dance,
we were mesmerized
our senses completely obliterated
ultimately we married in our moment of grace.
© 2015 Alfred Kukitz
Reviews
Yes, Jelena, a moment of grace. June 2011 I'm leaving only to return later.
Thanks FT!
Regards,
Al
Posted 9 Years Ago
that moment when that trance encapsulates our very beings and hearts are enthralled... marriage is the only way out... a lovely write, Al
Posted 9 Years Ago
that moment when that trance encapsulates our very beings and hearts are enthralled... marriage is the only way out... a lovely write, Al
Benita! Do You Love. Thank you!
Regards,
Al
Posted 9 Years Ago
Benita! Do You Love. Thank you!
Regards,
Al
Beautiful stanzas lines.
Ultimately we married in our
moment of grace.
Such a sweet
innocent moment
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless. Benita
Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautiful stanzas lines.
Ultimately we married in our
moment of grace.
Such a sweet
innocent moment
indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
God bless. Benita
Thanks Pryde. There are days one can never forget!
Regards,
al
Posted 9 Years Ago
Thanks Pryde. There are days one can never forget!
Regards,
al
ultimately we married in our moment of grace.
An elusive and much appreciated moment … great write, Al:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
ultimately we married in our moment of grace.
An elusive and much appreciated moment … great write, Al:)
this was Jelena, Croatia women, as we lived for a month in morning fire!
Thanks D!
regards,
al
Posted 9 Years Ago
this was Jelena, Croatia women, as we lived for a month in morning fire!
Thanks D!
regards,
al
9 Years Ago
oh wow, that is not that far from my birthplace :D
Awww, this was beautiful. I loved it. How wonderful when that special one surpasses the dogs of our conscience and reason, that we can only think with our hearts and soul. a magical dance :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
Awww, this was beautiful. I loved it. How wonderful when that special one surpasses the dogs of our conscience and reason, that we can only think with our hearts and soul. a magical dance :D
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Alfred Kukitz Deering, NH
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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end.
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