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A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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truth can be harmful

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A deleted line
Hush hush came after Sweet Charolette
In the vicinity of a dramatic overture
The words froze
Life spared
As we gayly walk in the trance of things.

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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I recall "It don't mean nothing" as an introduction to the Vietnam war. This was after I proclaimed myself fool and needed to grow up. OUCH!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


sometimes better when the words freeze, and we don't say what we really want to say---it could be hurtful...and leave someone with a handful of roses, but no hand to hold them in..."hush hush Sweet Charlotte, he's love you till he dies"----

love this one...

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2016
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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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