White Castle Imagination

White Castle Imagination

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
"

where's Alice?

"



White Castle Imagination


White Castle imagination,
Whispers by everyone
Calculated fun popping up everywhere
Did someone say reality
They did but talk counts for little
Or haven't you heard the whispers around here?

© 2016 Alfred Kukitz


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Young lady, you can have a holiday destination right in your own home.

Thank you!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


Haaahahaa...wonderland's my favourite holiday destination.....I still have an Alice there in me somewhere....I hope.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think Alice is chewing, unable to say what she's eating. I, meanwhile, thank both you gentlemen for this visit.

Did I hear a whisper?

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


i heard whispers...and then tasted sliders...which i love...

did Alice eat those?

but that is my own reality touched by this poem...



Posted 8 Years Ago


Short yet very imaginative. I like your style of writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on March 12, 2016
Last Updated on March 12, 2016
Tags: Whispers, imagination, mountain, talk

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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