Wayfarer on Water

the swim

Wayfarer on Water

Wayfarer on water, oceanic configurations,

Self in darkness spread into protoplasmic hodgepodge,

bioluminescence in shadow.

Swim all the water,

All of it,

It's language you will hear.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Moon!

Oh that water....ageless voice!

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Barleygirl!

I do love words. I'm drifting from images to letters.

regards,
al

[Moonie]

Haha...I definitely giggled at "protoplasmic hodgepodge"...a lot of puns and wordplay in here! The imagery is beautiful! :)))

[barleygirl]

This is a great example of word play. I think true writers are in love with words & here your love shows. Great word choices to convey both a narrowed focus, as well as a broad connotation. The title is a nice swatch of alliteration that conjures up good imagery.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

I've always loved the water. It sound, its form, its movement and stillness.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is one of my favorites by you...
real and surreal all at once...i was swimming in the lines. Hearing that language on the surface and deep below...