Touched

Touched

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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for Dante w/ no disrespect intended

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Touched by Divine

Neon chasing Jesus
Divine colors in abeyance
Flying through the air
the cross hits his mind
Neon falls
like Jesus he rises
Finally he colors himself
touched by divine

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Jacob!

I have an image of Jesus' cross in the air and neon kayaking toward Him.

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks Barleygirl!

Neon speaks loud!

regards,
al

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is delightfully fresh & surprising . . . felt like I was seeing & feeling it unfold with suspense . . . love the use of color intensity to symbolize different ways to display sincerity & faith.

Posted 6 Years Ago


great metaphor...that which touches us, we often don't understand...but God is somewhere in all of this flashiness...there was a Garden once---when all was bare and natural...and love ran free.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on October 11, 2017
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Tags: Neon, Jesus, divine, rises

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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