in the carnival of hope

popcorn please!

in the carnival of hope

a carnival of hope Debbie rides the
ferris wheel to the sky,
popcorn celebrations smother our eyes
even the bad guys are smiling again
on a last chance bid to ring the bell
al’s heart soars to sound and swell
teddy bear kisses Debbie’s sweet lips
the carnival hopes all is well!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Donna!

Deb is big on the love list!

Regards,
Al

[Donna]

This is a very cute poem!

[Onlyme]

Young love at the carnival of dreams that sometimes do come true.

[sette]

i like a hopeful poem it signals motivation and carnival is such a wonderful place to enjoy

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful and hopeful poem. I liked the positive feel of the words and the places you took me. Thank you Alfred for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote