it's a short poem from my frist book...

a joyfull poem from the end of my frist book Tale of The Rock Pieces...

Love and happiness will be around,

as all the chains will disappear.

And Mountaineers will climb their mount,

and there won't be any tear...

Author's Note

hope it sounds well?

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How wonderful; love, happiness and freedom with no tears. I wish all the world could know this! Very good!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

It sounds wonderful - I can't wait to read the book. I might end it with tears (plural) but otherwise a delight once again. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Poeticpiers]

It sounds well Ivan You have agood command of english

[Valentine]

Yes, it sounds well..If a person thinks deeply of the simple meaning of this..it is like a promise that if they fall in love..they will never have to fear or be enveloped in tears from it not lasting..Instead..it will be a steady up ward climb toward heaven on earth..God bless..Valentine