Haunting nightmare by rhythm of the river

Summary

So the story is about a lady who has frequent nightmares about her two greatest phobias which are isolation and darkness. In the dream, she is in a dark room with no escape and it seems there is another person with her but she doesn't notice until she feels him grab her. It looks like she might know this person real life but it is hard for her to see his full features because she wakes up before she can tell who he is. Lucy has kept this nightmare hidden from everyone but she then decided to tell her best friend before she regrets it further.

 

My thoughts on it

I like the fact that you went in depth to describe how the nightmare felt to Lucy.

Although I feel you should have waited a little bit more before telling us what the nightmare was all about. I need more details about Lucy and how this started in the first place