When I Was Little

When I Was Little

A Poem by Ally Crown

When I was little

You took me outside

And you told me to look up

I did

And my mind was filled with so much wonder

I felt as if I could fly


When I was little

You took me to the land of dreams

And you told me to imagine

I did

And my heart was filled with so much enthusiasm

I felt as though I were unstoppable


When I was little

You told me great stories

And you told me to listen

I did

And my eyes were filled with so much color

I felt like I was in a rainbow


I am not little anymore

You do not fill me with wonder

Enthusiasm

Or color

But doubt

And you tell me to look

Imagine

Listen

To you awful words of discouragement

And I do

© 2017 Ally Crown


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Ally Crown
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You in the last little bit should be your. ;) Other than that I really connect with this poem. It is very powerful. Keep Writing!

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Ally Crown
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Hello! My name is Ally Crown. I'm 16 and love to write and share ideas. You can find me on my website or on twitter: @Ginger_Gurly more..

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