LOST FRIEND

your screams (of joy and pain)
echo in my head
the good and bad memories we shared (are slowly fading away)
you told one day (after you lost everything)
i wish i was dead (stab or hang myself)
next month i see you lying in a hospital bed
(suicide gone wrong)
your screams (of joy and pain)
echo in my head
we've been friends since forever
(we should have died together)
you told me one day
(after you lost everything)
i wish i was dead (shoot or drown myself)
next month i see you lying
IN A COFFIN (YOUR ETERNAL BED)

Reviews

[Liz-z]

"your screams (of joy and pain)
echo in my head"
Whoa already sucked in. :)

"we've been friends since forever
(we should have died together) "
Wow, an amazing line, truly it says a lot. It's meaningful words and guilty meaning is just really touching... Beautiful.
Just the whole thing is pretty amazing, and I really loved that you wrote about this because it was just a really touching poem!
Great job! Thank you for sharing such an excellent piece!