Falling Through Time

Falling Through Time

A Poem by Spirit

Falling, falling, falling fast…

Holding on tight to make it last.

Time slips through my fingers like grains of sand,

And I can’t even steady it with both hands.

Second by second time flies on by,

It cannot be tamed so don’t even try,

Just stand your ground and face the day,

And watch as your life slips away.

© 2015 Spirit


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Wow. This is absolutely amazing. Loved EVERY SINGLE LINE in this one.

"Time slips through my fingers like grains of sand,
And I can’t even steady it with both hands.
Second by second time flies on by,
It cannot be tamed so don’t even try," - my favorite lines. Indeed how difficult is it for us to accept that certain things are beyond our control?. Interestingly, nothing really belongs to us but Time which even he has who has nothing else. The only thing that really belongs to us is Time, yet we have no control over it. Fantastic write. This one is going into my favorites.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow. This is absolutely amazing. Loved EVERY SINGLE LINE in this one.

"Time slips through my fingers like grains of sand,
And I can’t even steady it with both hands.
Second by second time flies on by,
It cannot be tamed so don’t even try," - my favorite lines. Indeed how difficult is it for us to accept that certain things are beyond our control?. Interestingly, nothing really belongs to us but Time which even he has who has nothing else. The only thing that really belongs to us is Time, yet we have no control over it. Fantastic write. This one is going into my favorites.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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