Mistakes That We've Done

There are lot of tragedies around the world going on that are tearing this world apart and we really need to ask ourselves " What the hell are we doing? "

 

So here you are in your room

Thinking of the mistakes that you’ve done

Mistakes that have made your loved ones get away from you

So you try your best to find the right way

To apologize and make them see you were wrong

To try to fill their hearts with happiness they deserve

 

But you ask yourself why should I

When this life keeps on bringing out tragedies

 

A father who’s holding his dying son

A mother who loses her only child

Why can’t we all think of the mistakes that we've done

A man whose wife gets taken away on his wedding day

A child whose family gets falling apart

Why can’t we just ignore the little dark spots between us and just save the white that’s underneath

 

Here we are in our world

Thinking of the mistakes that we’ve done

Mistakes that have made our humanity falling apart

So we try our best to find the right path

To spread peace all over our world

To fill this life with the beauty it deserves

To fill everyone with all the happiness they'll ever deserve

 

But we ask ourselves why should we

When we know this life won’t stop bringing out tragedies

 

A father who’s holding his dying son

A mother who loses her only child

Why can’t we all think of the mistakes that we've done

A man whose wife gets taken away on his wedding day

A child whose family gets falling apart

Why can’t we just ignore the little dark spots between us and just save the white that’s underneath

 

Let us all ignore the past and imagine what we could be

Let us all ignore this life and build the life we all have dreamed

 

A father who’s holding his graduated son

A mother who watches her only child with a little child

Why can’t we all think of the chances that we could have

A man whose wife gets another life inside of her

A child whose family takes him to Disney land

Why can’t we all just realize from the mistakes that’s we’ve done

Author's Note

i started to write this poem by thinking of my mother then the whole thing just came along...
hope u like it...

Reviews

[RHEA CROSLEY]

"So we try our bests to find the right path
To spread the peace all over our world
To bring out happiness from deep inside this life
To bring out happiness for everyone" I like this part especially because I think there is a fountain at the throne of God that over flows with power and love for doing love and love glorifies His name for " God is love". in the end ten thousand years from now when we sit down with God All the suffering will be hard to remember after being totally blessed thought this small start to are eternity of discovering all the awesome things God has in store for us for eternity. God paid for all our sins on the cross now He wants to bless us forever. So you are write why do we sweet the small stuff "Why can�t we just ignore the little dark spots ".

[darkgurl]

This is very emotional and sad, well written though.

[Berserker[Diktator Von ..]

Wow.. this was an emotional piece that taps into many emotions...you did a great job with this one..Keep up the great work...=)

Your friend,
Berserk..=)