Ah! About the weather

Ah! About the weather

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Today's weather will be
Fine, 26, partly cloudy
Now after the break
Today's weather will be
Rain, 12, showers, cold
After the news, looking at
Today's weather ...
Hot, 38, dry winds.
Just repeating
Today's weather
Fine , 21, sunny.
It's the afternoon news break so stay tuned 
Today's weather will be
Cloudy, -2, heavy snow.
About the weather: Really! Will they ever get the weather right?
And ...
Today's emotions
I was happy, smiling 37.5
Now, not happy, 15, cold.

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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Now this made me smile as it contains something near the truth and that frustrates us all. good free verse with irony.

Did you know that the captain of Darwin's ship the Beagle, Captain Fitzroy, invented weather forecasting?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

thanks for sharing John and no , and you learn something different everyday :)
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alf
Het I thought you were in Sydney!!! Or were you just in Melbourne for the day????? Or . . . are we really talking about emotions . . . Loved this so very, very realistic on both counts, alf

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thanks alf only my thoughts travel lol
I can feel your frustration, Andrew. I think they're making an estimated, calculated guess at the possibility of the probability of ...whatever!

Here in San Diego, the west coast of the USA, we're pretty much in the throws of spring, with temps in the mid 70's, with lots and lots of sunshine and clear skies...so far!

Nice to meet you, Andrew!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you kelly, to be honest I don't like our summer above 35 to 44 thats all. lol Thanks for your .. read more
great write, very creative and fun to read!
Oh and stop going all hot and cold geez so fickle !! lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Just like the weather! lol:) Thanks sereena
Partly sunny and happy..although shady and cloudy in some spots..all and all a good forecast of a poem..may even reach 100 degrees in rating numbers on the meter..feels like 93.....lol liked this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thanks Fran what a clever comeback, very witty! You made me laugh!
  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

You're welcome , Mr. Weather man
andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol...............................
Yeah not everyone has the luck of working in Arizona right, lol:)
Today, tomorrow and the next 10 years its going to be HOT!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol I need rain! thanks for reviewing Mr.J

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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