I'm closer to believing

My head lies on your naked breasts

I taste your words upon each breath

Your beating  heart resonates

So close, yet so far away.

Your love, I cannot, now ignore

I'm closer to believing

How I want more

But my heart is far away.

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not sure if this is a trust issue following being hirt or that the heart of the writer lies still with another. Whichever a flowing free verse with good emotional content.

[andrew mitchell]

Hi John , Maybe the past catches up with you in thought sometimes and interferes with the present but only in mind!

[MCS]

It's hard to allow those feelings to take root when life's hardships have kicked one around

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks MCS for your time reviewing.