No energy

In the shower

Standing motionless

Washing my thoughts.

Life drips off my elbows

Running down my legs;

Spiralling down

The corridors of waste

And is ... lost.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Once again you have left me speech less. Such a simple concept that exudes such a depth of unexplored territory. I feel you are working up to something monumental . . . then what will I do??? I know I am going to flabbergasted. Not by the product, (cause I already know that's lurking waiting to spring,) but by inability to articulate my thoughts!!! This is so much better thank I think you rate it. alf

[~]

A great descriptive piece. i can trace that life slipping away, and if i locate it - i will surely give you a call :)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Ms It had a double mean as water is life . :0

[sharonlee]

Oh... far from lost my new friend... cleansed.
What a treat, such a wisdom packed little write...

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sharonlee for passing by in my world of madness lol!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Great descriptive write here that captures that experience well. Not sure I really want to imagine you in the shower though Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

lol Thanks John I don't know how many times I just drift in the shower but its often. And no its not about me physically/ You crack me up! lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Crack you up perhaps but I won't be passing you the soap lol.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you I appreciate that and same to you and I let my wife do that lol!! pass the soap

[AaronFreitas]

Man I don't know how many times I have stood motionless in the shower just letting the water wash everything away from me. Awesome work the way you provide the perfect image my friend.

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Aaron , you do forget time and place and just watch the water go down the drain. Thanks for dropping by.:)