Broken

Broken dreams:

Shredded thoughts.

Broken heart:

Shattered love.

Both chained to walls

Bleeding till dry.

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Andrew. The walls of our souls have so very much to bear. The remnants of shattered dreams lie scattered on the floor and the broken heart chained above. I love the terse and succinct message you send. A monument to lost love, alf

[andrew mitchell]

we all have chains of lost loves alf. Nice review and so perceptive you are lol

[alf]

Hey, isn't that the truth!! This is a really profound expression of emotion. really great!!

[Adam Adams]

Yes, betrayal's hidden behind being broken, because, broken's meant to be betrayed even by tears... shattered by shuddered dreams. Nice flow of ink!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Adams for dropping by

[....................]

Completely broken... may as well hang the soul out to dry too in this dungeon of despair.

[andrew mitchell]

lol thanks FT I felt like a dark deep write, short and sharp to stir the pot to hit the target.

[....................]

well, my friend, you have achieved all goals with this one...

[andrew mitchell]

Is this a good thing!!!????

[....................]

yes sir, indeed it is :)