outside the.....

Someone once said

Think outside the box.

So I did.

Nothing's happening!

I feel lost

How do I get back inside...... 

The BOX!!

My thoughts naked,

Vulnerable, open,

Subjected to the weather.

I'm never leaving

My CIRCLE again!

Reviews

[B]

Lol
Where is the box
Who took the box
Who turned off the lights

its amazing how our familiar grounds keep us earthed
But stepping out is essential for growth

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you mademoiselle

[Gabriel's Last Breath (..]

my favorite poem that i've read on this page so far

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you MD for your kind words and I look forward to visiting yours :)

[sereenaoutloud]

I like your take on this metaphor of thinking outside the box, it was fun and the use of the Circle being your comfort ...very clever!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you , my young wise musketeer, my friend Aramis LL

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Always creative and fun that comes out of your work:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you my friend JT

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha we all like our comfort zones. Getting outside the box can indeed expose us Andrew but more so the actions than the thinking lol! Nice neatly expressed sentiment with a touch of learned defiance at the end.

[andrew mitchell]

lol I smile at your dear comments John lol Thank You