Come out come out wherever you are!

Come out come out wherever you are!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Where do thoughts come from?
When expressed.
When they rise to the surface.
Here I am!
A thought!
Where do thoughts go?
Is a thought just a thought?
Do we have many thoughts?
Or does one thought rule
Ever changing by emotions!
The thoughts of love
Where do they hide
When not in love?
The thoughts of despair
Where do they hide 
When one is happy?
The thought that cries!
The thought in anger!
What happens to that thought
When fired, retired.
Does it sleep?
What thoughts reminds us
Of other thoughts
We forget?
Why doesn't the forgotten thought
Speak out! I'm over here!
Is there more to thoughts!
A penny for your thoughts!
Can you buy one?
A thought for the day!
People say: Spare a thought!
I don't know how many
Spares I have to spare!
Food for Thought!
Perish the thought!
Thoughts could rule
The mind if not contained.
And if you are not thinking, 
Where are the thoughts
On vacation. Sleeping?
That's a thought!
Am I being thoughtless!

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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i am lost in thought and wondering about thoughts,,,where they come from,where they go,,,a splendid write dear poet

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear Poet!
That way madness lies. I love thinking about thoughts, the mind and all the intricate paths they weave in the background, which grow and evolve into the soundtrack of our lives and who we become. It is an obsession with me. Right now I am reading about mirror neurons in a V.S. Ramachandaran book (the guy is a genius). A quick example of his more than thoughts on thoughts is....If we were both sitting in a room that could take a scan of our brain activity, and were chatting across the table, when you took a sip from a drink, our brains image would be identical, despite the fact that you carried out the action and I only observed it. All the neurons and connections firing away, as you first look, thenpick up the drink, take some, place It back down, then carry on talking would match mine, despite the fact I only observed. They work by mimicking the actions you see as if you have done them. It is awesome reading, but too complex for a poetry review, so well done, nicely captured etc etc :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Wow very interesting on this VS theory. Thanks for your kind words Lorry
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A very nice poem, Andrew. I know its a little cliche, but I THOUGHT it was wonderful. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Doodley for your words and dropping by
Mind-bogglingly splendid!
You always deliver. ALWAYS.

Thoughts make things. So often, we come across the power of thoughts, the value of synchronicity and such like, but the exact texture and grain of thought is spoken but not written of in poetry. This is really a thought-provoking insight, Andrew. Keep it up.

And thanks for sharing.

Best, M.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Malika:)
Wow ! Where this thought come from ? It's so creative ! I really admire your writing style !love this poem it's fantastic

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much zunie
zunie frost

8 Years Ago

welcome !!
One could easily become lost in thought, reading this. Now, there's a concept!

You are a joy, Andrew!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kelly and I may pinch that lost thought. I wondered where it got to. You had it!
Nice work... love the organization of thoughts and your delivery :) Always enjoy your creativity :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you my friend for your kind words
Awesome write AM, such a creative write that is fun but also has the reader thinking and this is very Thought- out write! lol :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

I know I was thoughtful! haha Thank you SeReeNaA :) for your time as always much loved!
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

Awww.. always a pleasure AM :)
Brilliantly articulated Andrew. Lots of food for thought here, the hungry blighters. I really liked this from start to finish. Very thoughtFULL write indeed my friend.
Kudos

Posted 8 Years Ago


ANTO

8 Years Ago

that third line is a bit rude - is that an aussie accent your singing with?
ANTO

8 Years Ago

Mrs Jessop - lol - no - Mrs Sullivan - hmmm
sereenaoutloud

8 Years Ago

cannae hear ya anto...sorry what was that...your breaking up this is a bad connect...........
From now on I shall dub thee the Humorous Philosophic Poet... you are the only one I have met to approach writing this way... reading your work is always entertaining and thought provoking... i just may cancel Netflix! Well-done! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you FT what a nice compliment my friend and ditto back to you FT cos you have your own unique .. read more

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