I think the naughtiness is in the eyes of the beholder, she just ignites that flame with her beauty .. read moreI think the naughtiness is in the eyes of the beholder, she just ignites that flame with her beauty bare! Thank you Vanessa
8 Years Ago
I think you're absolutely right with this way of thinking and imagining things.
You seem to have mastered the art of writing complex feeling into abbreviated verse. I wish I could do so. My writes tend to get a little verbose. This piece says much in a short space, and I admire your ability to have that effect. Great job! take care...dan
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you very much Dan, I appreciated your kind words. Its funny when I read your works I think the.. read moreThank you very much Dan, I appreciated your kind words. Its funny when I read your works I think the if only I had the ability to write big poems and hold the reader's attention like yours. I find short is easier but short can be a flop as well.
Strindberg said.
" When I come home and sit at my writing table, then I live.... I live, and I live in manifold fashion of all human beings. I depict; I am glad with the glad, wicked with the wicked,.. more..