Do thoughts collide?

Do thoughts collide?

I think they do

for I'll was just about to do something

when on being interrupted

overpowered by the last

I forgot the first intention.

As the deep thought tripped

over the negative thought

Think thought paused

being a thought reader.

But there was no going back

memory didn't lock it in.

Forgotten!

Reviews

[Scrap]

Very clever and so true!!!! My mind drives me craaaazzzyyyy

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you for your kind comments Scrap!

[Solar]

//for I'll was just about to do something
when on being interrupted
overpowered by the last
I forgot the first intention.//

This is a thought-provoking poem - elision ...and interruption, collision...

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks so much Solar

[Sami Khalil]

Head on collisions and sideways. You have collided with creativity on a great scale. Now, let us call the cops to record the accident. Lol
I love your questioning...)))))

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sami forget the cops The ambulance is needed! lol:):):)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome muchly. .))))))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and they certainly collide more often and with more severe injury as we get older.

:))))

[andrew mitchell]

They certainly do with bruising impact lol thanks jacob :)