The onion had heart!

Something dark this time!!:)

The onion had heart!

Slicing

those poetic entrails, lines;

your guts of the poem, spilled.

Revealed.

I cried

reading your words, 

bleeding,

so easily.

You had heart after all.

Reviews

[Érenn]

I liked it i am not sure why but i must have read it 10 times before i even realized, "Did I still not review this?"
Not sure what's making me read it again and again, but i believe i am going to come more often to read this one. ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you dear poet I shall visit you shortly!

[Érenn]

Oh don't worry ^^ i am too busy reading poems right now and it's enjoyable. Gives me new ways and ideas to portray my thoughts. So it's fun. :D

[andrew mitchell]

go for it!..............................:)