A Celestial Wish

A Celestial Wish.

A galaxy of dreams

broken up, expanding

in a constellation;

stars showering the horizon.

The outcome coloured

brought about by

a wish

for all to see,

universal.

Reviews

[Érenn]

This one is different in a good way. ^^ Sorry, been a while since I dropped by down your write have been busy reading so many others. ^^ I love what you have presented here. Whether the structure of this write or the transition of the tone from the first verse to the second one. The imagery you have invoked here is quite a treat superb word choices. And your brevity as usual has left me in awe always been a fan of it. ^^ Thank you for sharing I really enjoyed this write, has nicely mixed up a message in it as well. really loved allegory here. ^^

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much dear Errenn. Nice of you to say!

[ms. barrie]

inspiring write...I love the divine wisdom u incorporated into
this...with gorgeous imagery weaved throughout
Thank you for sharing (:

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much ethereal chaos for your kind words and for taking the time.;);)

[ms. barrie]

you're welcome, Sir I still wish I really was a black cat (:

[andrew mitchell]

you never know, you may have the feline moves of a black cat:);)

[ms. barrie]

lol more like lime hello...but muchas gracis