How about some magic!

How about some magic!

I tried some magic mushrooms.

I wonder when the magic starts?

So far,

I can't find the dove in the hat.

Or the ace of spades

in a pack of cards.

Just now I've inserted

the swords into the box.

I'm a bit worried

I haven't heard from the volunteer.

My wife is not normally this quiet.

I've tried saying repeatedly. 

"Is everything alright in there?"

No answer.

Now I'm getting high!

Still no magic!

Reviews

[Doodley]

Hahaha. Great stuff!

Another very original gem of a poem, Andrew. Very funny.
There is something hilarious about putting the wife in the magic box, the one in which you insert swords into. Normally they would still be giving us a hard time!

Well written, as always. Humourous and original. Nice work.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you so much Doodley for your comments:))

[Nisreen]

This is very funny

just say no !!!

[andrew mitchell]

thank you my dear poet nisreen

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is a magic ride into the delusions drugs can conjure up...and the paranoia that comes with it.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you j, its a fun fictional write lol and yes captures all those delusions

[V]

Drugs and magical worlds and, of course, some wit, added to the scheme. An entertaining read.

[andrew mitchell]

thank you vanessa

[ms. barrie]

I absolutely adore this! this is amazing! I think you created your
own version of Alice's adventures. I'm in awe of your talent, Andrew...
I feel this has more of a cynical take {subtle} of C.W. Lewis...theme
your word play is incredible...love the whimsical journey your
words took me on. Thank you for the ride...and mushrooms!
~ x - barrie

[andrew mitchell]

yes that little trip down hallucinogenic lane lol Just a fictional write ms barrie. thanks for a great review.:)

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcomed, Andrew. it's a delightful write.