Communication breakdown.

Communication breakdown.

A Poem by andrew mitchell

Communication breakdown.
It was only
a crack in the wall
but the divide
was enormous.

Silence reigned on
communication breakdown.

© 2016 andrew mitchell


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Awesome piece of brevity Andrew!

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Too kind lynn but bring it on!! lol:)
and if those cracks don't soon get patched, the wall between will crumble to where there is no rebuilding...

excellent short piece...love the metaphor.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob for your words

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