I won't tell you again.

I won't tell you again.

While the prettiness of you
shines brightly on me
clouds of darkness reigns
on the bruises and black eye;
just reflections of me
given by you with
your words cascading
" I won't tell you again!"

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there is a difference between discipline, which is sorely needed, and abuse...

actions and words hurt equally...emotion's black eye.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

There certainly is, more heavy handed in my day but not scathed from it and one was scared of police when I was young, today there's no fear!

[Einstein Noodle]

wow ..serious stuff sir! i see a child as the speaker .. a parent as the antagonist .. i worked as an RN in a PICU and child abuse is no joke ..i'm kind of glad to see this side of you ..well done ..powerful and emotive for me
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you kind Sir. I shall return the love in a week's time.