All aboard her ghost train.

All aboard her ghost train.

As the train of desire,

old 'n' rusty

pulled into the station

of possible opportunities;

with no oncoming thoughts boarding,

no longer regarded by youth,

she left empty handed,

dead in her tracks.

The tracks of her time

had spoken;

no whistles!

Reviews

[Tom]

The ravages of time will eventually make its indelible mark despite all these cosmetic surgeons who promise eternal beauty, no possible but many will pay £££ and more to assuage their vanity and egotistical nature !

A short yet very creative write, surprising indeed there are not a 'ton' of positive reviews for this one?

Nice work, like your thinking Andrew !

[andrew mitchell]

thank you so much Tom. It's really all about old age in general, I just push the onus onto the opposite sex rather than upon myself lol haha yes thanks for reviewing a taboo subject. Its nice to get one review lol:):)