Bleeding love!

Bleeding love!

The heart bleeds

when the jugular

is severed,

breaking ties,

the love subtracts

from two hearts,

divided.

Reviews

[Diamond]

May God never severe such cords...for such love and the hearts survive on them. Your poem pierced me into my reality. Excellent.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Dear Queen for stopping by and reviewing.:)

[Diamond]

Pleasure was mine. Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

A summation of such realities about love and romance. I like the elements of adding and subtracting you employ.
You add much to poetry...:).................

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Sami I might add a last word so it reads "from two hearts divided" I'm just not sure!! lol

[Sami Khalil]

As you like. You are welcome. ....:::))))