When initiative had altitude sickness!

When initiative had altitude sickness!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

The altitude of common sense
depreciated on the opening
of the parachute
conveying reasoning
in the freefall floating,
the mind rotating
on the landing complete.

One may ask
did the initiative
reach its target?

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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Initiative without restraint , like free fall can end up simply as a bloody mess. A nice analogy on "blue sky" thinking and "head in the clouds" political decisions that are so prevalent these days.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

thank you norman

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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