The blindsided chill.

The chill 

from not knowing

was rewarded

by the shivers knowing

the very, very cold

was now entering you.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oooooooooooooooo that is so spooky to me!! i love it! so few words in mystery and death ...sharp long stiletto knives and the cruelest of a lover's goodbye, cold kiss ;) inspiring for me! love it!
E.

[Ken Simm.]

Atmospheric and moody. Excellent.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Sounds like a back to back disagreement between lovers ... nicely penned! :-)

[andrew mitchell]

you may be on the money! lol thanks for reading and for your words.