They were both put on notice!

As the feud
between ink and paper
raged on,
it was the battle of thoughts
that produced the blotch on paper,
for ink and paper were just pawns
that settled ideas in the scores
while thoughts watched on.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Such a fine use of words, somewhat satirical yet meaning more than most people would or could envisage, Andrew.

'it was the battle of thoughts
that produced the blotch on paper,
for ink and paper were just pawns
that settled ideas in the scores
while thoughts watched on.'

if I had created those lines, would be smiling at my own brilliance - humbly, of course!

[andrew mitchell]

You are brilliant with your poetry em very skilled indeed and very popular. Thank you for your kind words em.

[emmajoygreen]

I always find something special and worth thinking about in your writing, Andrew

[Red Brick Keshner]

Witnessed too many of these and the feud goes on!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Red , hope you are well.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Well as can be, thanks Andrew.

[θεά]

Fantabulous Andrew. Perhaps one of your best. Good to see you prolific as ever.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you very much malika

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the author's manipulation...just like in Clash of the Titans where the gods were using us a pawns on a in a chess game...moving us around...cool piece.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Jacob for your words