How do you like your time, rare or well done?

How do you like your time, rare or well done?

A Poem by andrew mitchell

There was no gain from the pain
as there was collecting
the splosh from a splash
from tears dropping!

A stutter in the flutter
a bird's first jump
was no more
a dare in the care
that things would be
alright.

But there was a lot of
stink in the sink
that thoughts
would not fail you,
a Titanic sinking-
a life in strife.

However, there was  only chatter in the matter
that the crime against time
was in the hands of the sands.

But the turning in the burning
in the end had us fried
til there was nothing
born from something.

© 2018 andrew mitchell


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Perhaps only when we lose everything do we stand to gain anything of worth..... or perhaps life’s just fecking UNFAIR! Well written Andrew. Thanks for sharing this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rising from the ashes, like a phoenix. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

adelaide, Australia



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