All but dry.

My thoughts are
all but dry,
sculptured by time
now eroded.
But where the sands
turned to glass
I saw myself old
on reflection.

Reviews

[gram linski]

Great poem, Andrew, succinct and sharp and deep and true

[Chris Shaw]

You've done all the thinking you want to do. Drained yourself dry with the passage of time. Feeling your age Andrew?


Chris

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Chris, sometimes I feel my age but in this case I like to write in the i format for more impact even though it’s not necessarily about me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i hope we can keep the creative thoughts irrigated enough to continue writing into our really really old age.
j.

[andrew mitchell]

So do I Jacob, belated thank you s.

[Sami Khalil]

Are you saying you have a dry sense of humor? I don't think so sir Mitchell. Your wit and thoughts are not dry as a desert. I see an oasis of harems from a distance. Lol

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Sami for your kind review, love your humour, a harem sounds like hard work lol.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are welcome.