A Moonlit Knight.

The moonlit tear sheds

on the comet of sorrow passing

showering a smile

that waits

on the sun rising.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This feels very artful, full of well-crafted imagery! I love using a comet here, which feels like the central theme for a shower of heavenly imagery! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[R.E. Ray]

Andrew, this poem describes so well how we often feel the heaviness of darkness, yearning for sunrise to warm us and dry our tears. There's something magical about the sun, especially when we spend a sad night alone. A good write, sir.