Just  stringing along

Just stringing along

A Poem by andrew mitchell

When I pulled your string
It was shorter than expected
But only time knew.

© 2024 andrew mitchell


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I call this poem, Slapped in the Pool. (I'd seen the strings on talking dolls and I really only wanted to share some conversation./ But the string I pulled was to her bikini top and that ended all chance of further relations.) (laughing) We must be careful pulling strings though, all sorts of things can come unraveled. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


andrew mitchell

3 Weeks Ago

Enjoyed your review Fabian. Thank you very much.
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mou
I feel expectations have a mission to fail our beliefs. True, ultimately time reveals the story. Another subtle and multidimensional write, AM
- mou


Posted 4 Weeks Ago


andrew mitchell

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you mou for your kind words.
dear Andrew… we are like Kites that soar over Rivers… and fields of Heather. Thank you for sharing. gently, Pat

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


andrew mitchell

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you Pat for your kind words
I hope you don't get dooped by politicians or by the news. Beware my friend.

Posted 1 Month Ago


andrew mitchell

4 Weeks Ago

Hahahahahaha thanks Sami I won't
Sami Khalil

4 Weeks Ago

Yes siiiirrrrr. You are welcome Great Emperor!

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Added on April 21, 2024
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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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