The Ghost

it started off as a song I don't know what it would be called now but this is what I ended up with

I cry for him

The one who can’t see me standing by his side

I pray for him

The one who can’t hear me crying his name

 Yet he still won’t see or listen to me

 All he sees is her beauty gone, forever young

But I’m still here so why can’t he see me

 Or hear me coming through the door

I still cry and pray for him

Even though it does not help

 But I cry and prey because I’m in love with him

But he still loves her even though she is gone

But I’m still here even though I’m not exactly her

 I still am her so why doesn’t he love me anymore

Is it because it’s just me not her anymore    

Reviews

[Emily]

I like it, the way you worded it was just right, and I love the title you gave it!