moonlight heartbreak.

Crashing into what we were,
all that's left - an empty bottle
Filled with words we left unsaid.
Moonlight heartbreak,
the worst a girl could ever take.
I just want to hear your voice again,
if only for a minute.
Recapture that old feeling in my soul,
put the butterflies you used to give me
in a jar.
And save them for a rainy day.

Reviews

[Jersey]

put the butterflies you used to give me
in a jar.
And save them for a rainy day.

I'd have to say this was my favorite part to this piece. It's a lovely piece. Keep writing, your work is amazing.

[deeps]

Recapture that old feeling in my soul,
put the butterflies you used to give me
in a jar.
And save them for a rainy day.

Once again this part drug me in,
You have a way with words, this is wonderful.