Physitry

I know its outrageously stupid and dull. But i always wanted to combine my 2 hobbies poetry and physics. Here is the result, if you can bear it

 
Would we know gravity?
If Newton was a bard,
Would you know relativity?
If Einstein was a poet hard
Hard on writing sonnets maybe,
Or ballads, or odes on a paper shard
All to please his dear lady,
Making her glad, with postcards  
What then would be his discovery?
A new form of poetry!
A one that's called physitry!
A one that's called physitry!
 
                ---------- Amar laksh

Author's Note

Please be soft

Reviews

[C.R.Turner]

Easy on the poetrons - particles of charged poetic imagery! :)

Good cross-discipline work here!

[amarlaksh]

thank you very much dear physit :)

[quinfinn]

interesting twist indeed....i would have expected something like "two protons deeply in love who could never fuse" or some such nonsense. you have made this light and humorous and very fun to read. well done.

[Writer *78*]

Not many people would combine science and poetry but you seem to have a creative outlook towards the two. Nice Work.

[Tarry Franck]

Very creative - love it!!!!

[Blue Ivory]

haha this is creative! And funny :D

[PP]

A physicist is the biggest believer of nature,
A physicist is inspired by nature
A physicist is always challenged by nature
His job is intriguing, exciting, thoughtful, creative & philosophical
Just like a good poet
Asking questions & Seeking answers.

Nice write :)

[David Scott]

Physics and mathematics are pure art forms. The equations are more expressive and perfect than any language on earth. Theoretical physics is poetry! I'm glad you enjoy both disciplines. They are like breath and blood. One is no good without the other and they are both only relevant to sustain life.
Enjoyed the tease.
Be well

[Dr. Wood ?]

E equals MC squared...as if anybody cared

Albert Einstein

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Amar, I like this lovely piece. The concept is original. The question tantalising. The only thing I would say is do not repeat the final line as it dilutes its impact in this instance.

[amarlaksh]

well thank you for your review. And i'll keep that in mind.

[Tex]

I love love love this fun little poem.

You Rock. Keep up the great writes.