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u try to find your way but it seems like yo keep ending up where you started

  A girl is on a hike and it is getting dark so she tries to find her way back to her car. While she is walking the sun sets and it becomes dark. This girl was dumb enouph to not bring and light with her and when she reaches for her phone she falls. She becomes scared and she doesnt want to go on she she stays there. this is what life can be like you are on you way...on the right path but when things become dark you stuble and sometimes you stay in the same spot not feeling like moving forward.

Reviews

[StacyPerry]

Good write.

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I enjoyed this. Very well written

[Adora.xo]

Wonderful piece! Very true as well, just work on some corrections in there! A few spelling errors.

~Adora

[Ashlynn]

i didnt know i could

[Kaelyn Shea]

this is awsome! why didnt you tell me you could write?