Before I Go

a poem i wrote when me and one of my friends had a fight

Before I Go....

 

Before i go

i want you to know

that i've left behind

Something for you to find

 

A small, folded note

that i have wrote

A promise to put in the past

All things that happened so fast

 

I wish we could forget

All the things we both regret

Restart our friendship before it's gone

Where I can stop feeling withdrawn

 

We both said hurtful words, that wasn't meant to be said

Made both of us turn a dark fiery red

We were both angry at one another

And decided to take our friendship no further

 

It's time to forgive and forget

Where we will no longer have to live with regret

We should apologize and continue being friends

All of this will finally come to an end

Reviews

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This is good. It really shows how hard it is for friends to fight. I think the words you chose were perfect. The poem flowed well. Good work!

[Sarah]

Beautiful piece. But that's always what I expect from you. It really tugs at your heart strings. Friendship or relationships that end so suddenly and horribly are difficult to put behind and you really brought forth the emotions that should have been brought up in this. Yet another remarkable poem from you and I can't wait to read more. So keep submitting!

[Clouded in Hopeful Illu..]

This is really touching. Sometimes no matter how much a couple of friends have been through or how long they have been friends for, things never work out and you lose touch with them. It's really hard to trust anyone and I think this poem shows that you and your friend would be able to trust each other regardless of the fight. I think that is wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

[Nova]

I thought this was good.
It always sucks when you get in a fight with your friends.