SOLITUDE

SOLITUDE

A Poem by Ambereen

Isolation really ? 
But thoughts always accompany me !

© 2013 Ambereen


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Isolation is a frame of mind,
One that the creative spark enjoys,
Fester, brew it does all things and more,
Helping to cope within the world around you,
Making you see things differently; or objects that arent there.
Do not fear Isolation it can be the greatest gift for the writer and his/her thoughts.

(Sorry I didnt expect to write that based on one word, but I hope you liked it)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ambereen,

In a pill box in Viet Nam: suffocating; hot; dark; damp; stinking; painful; sweating; pissing; crapping; fearing; listening; despairing; crying; and dying. But thoughts accompanied me! Isolation? Really? I'm a survivor because my thoughts accompanied me in my solitude.

Sorry, but you asked my thoughts. I don't like to go there but sometimes it helps to revisit Hell. Works wonders for the creativity.

Sometimes less is more and in your poem 7 words say it all. Great stuff.

Thanks for it sharing with us.






Posted 11 Years Ago


Isolation is a frame of mind,
One that the creative spark enjoys,
Fester, brew it does all things and more,
Helping to cope within the world around you,
Making you see things differently; or objects that arent there.
Do not fear Isolation it can be the greatest gift for the writer and his/her thoughts.

(Sorry I didnt expect to write that based on one word, but I hope you liked it)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thoughts are always with us........try to shut them off and you willl find there are even more. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful meditation idea. You can sit and think about it forever.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hard to leave the mind behind. You can meditate and change your thoughts. Only isolation is to be far away from city and problems. A very good poem. Create thoughts to ponder.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And who said "No man is an island."? Great thinking you've got there!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

great question!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amazing the impact you can make with 7 words. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ambereen

11 Years Ago

thanks Frieda !
Not a poem just a thought depicting the irony of the word ! Would love to know what my fellow writers think on the same .

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 7, 2013
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Ambereen
Ambereen

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